TangoStar's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Intro to Troll Treasure]

Not bad, if you did the scenario, it's really beautiful.

The only thing I disliked is that if you compare John with the scenario gives me a strange feel. Older cartoons do this, but they usually draw a black outline in the characters.

If you want to use these detailed scenarios I suggest you to begin draw black outlines in the characters. The animation still cool, good work!

stberntz responds:

I did everything :-) And thank you for the interesting comments on black outlines for John, I will consider it!

[A HARD DAY]

It's not a masterpiece, but if it's your first animation, it's very good! I liked the little story, it's very cool.

Now you just need practice at character drawings and the animation. I'm pretty sure that with time you'll get it.

What I just don't liked is that it's a mix of drawings and photos. It does a little "clash" in animation and makes it with a strange feeling. Something strange too is when the jerk sits in the couch. His arms doesn't appear.

Anyways, I'll want to see more of you, because you have potential!

[Ninja Hero 3D First animation]

The only problem with this animation is that the fighting is too slow.

A real robot or ninja would not take 3 seconds to punch the enemy. You should repair that in the next one.

Beside this, very detailed scenery for a "blocky" animation. Is just weird that the ninja looks like that Pixar's lamp with a mask and glasses, but I'll not complain this.

It's a okay animation, but you should put a bit more work next time.

[[Persona 4] Animated Comic Dub (part 1)]

I laughed almost the entire video. Never played Persona, but showing this way just makes it looks so funny!

A nice smooth animation, good voice acting and funny jokes. This is a recipe for a very good animation.

I don't wait for see the next parts, well done!

Carbonwater responds:

Worth checking out the P4 anime, i'll give you a general idea of the plot.
Glad you enjoyed it regardless!

[Stick Fighter [No.1]]

It's your first animation? That was so cool!

The frames was smooth, the effects let the animation charming, and the best of all, was funny! The ending was the most funnier part.

A very funny animation, good job!

g9hp8613 responds:

thank tou --------

[Inside The Animation]

This is a very interesting idea for a movie, but you should pay attention to these details:

-When making a stop-motion, make sure to do it in a place where the illumination don't changes every time. Like, next time you should close your windows and turn on the room's lights.

-For let scenes more enjoyable, add some more life, like in the 3D animation part. You could, for example, put some tall grass or some critters to add more life.

-When making a transition like "10 minutes later" or "30 seconds later", be sure you can make use of a long time of a action. For example, for he getting at the duck, you could make he get faster by making he take the line off from the toolbar. In the duck scene, you could have made him press the copy button very fast for a more comedic scene.

Other than that, it's a very cool short. Good luck on the next works!

Stampthenation responds:

Thanks for the feedback it'll come in handy when we're evaluating the project :)

[Ace Attorney In a Nutshell]

I already watched this one on YouTube, and I totally liked it! Hahah, this resume Ace Attorney gameplays just right.

But... You're forgetting ONE thing your honor.

You're forgetting that the author on the stand right now... *Slams the table* Gonna have 5 stars!