Klei Entertainment Presents
Klei Entertainment Presents
That's a very fine piece of animation! You should surely make a finished animation, I really want to see your skills in action.
"I understood though that Newgrounds' users usually prefer long, badly-drawn but funny/silly/brutal animations, so I think I'll try to make one soon just to test it out."
That's not true at all. There's a variety of users who likes a variety of content. There's people who likes bad drawn while there's the ones who like animations where it has put a lot of effort (Though I think everyone likes good drawn animations = P).
And there's people who like funny, silly and brutal animations, as they like musical, romantic and adventurous animations as well.
What really decide if they like or not depend on their likes and dislikes, and the effort you put on your work.
Good luck on the next animation!
Thanks for your reply!
Yeah, of course, people are different and I'm always going to keep my animations up to my standarts no matter how many "stars" I get here. But it's just worth testing out for fun :)
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Not bad, if you did the scenario, it's really beautiful.
The only thing I disliked is that if you compare John with the scenario gives me a strange feel. Older cartoons do this, but they usually draw a black outline in the characters.
If you want to use these detailed scenarios I suggest you to begin draw black outlines in the characters. The animation still cool, good work!
I did everything :-) And thank you for the interesting comments on black outlines for John, I will consider it!
It's not a masterpiece, but if it's your first animation, it's very good! I liked the little story, it's very cool.
Now you just need practice at character drawings and the animation. I'm pretty sure that with time you'll get it.
What I just don't liked is that it's a mix of drawings and photos. It does a little "clash" in animation and makes it with a strange feeling. Something strange too is when the jerk sits in the couch. His arms doesn't appear.
Anyways, I'll want to see more of you, because you have potential!
The only problem with this animation is that the fighting is too slow.
A real robot or ninja would not take 3 seconds to punch the enemy. You should repair that in the next one.
Beside this, very detailed scenery for a "blocky" animation. Is just weird that the ninja looks like that Pixar's lamp with a mask and glasses, but I'll not complain this.
It's a okay animation, but you should put a bit more work next time.
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